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Post by Kroven/Fenris on Nov 4, 2004 18:06:06 GMT -5
Just read this.....Fen has gone from snarling to whimpering and back to snarling....it's amazing! But why do I (Fen: *raised eyebrow*) O.K. why does Fen get the feeling something bad will happen next? Oh don't let poor Everett and Rhya suffer any more.
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Amelia + Saquelsis. White dove. White pigeon. White bird.
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Post by Amelia on Nov 4, 2004 20:47:43 GMT -5
wow....really? I'm so happy! Sorry to upset Fenris. Yes, it's not exactly a happy ending...there's kind of a clue in the passage from TAS about what happens in the long run. But as far as intercision and all that goes, nothing like that will happen to them.
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Post by Kirjavi on Nov 4, 2004 22:30:32 GMT -5
phew! Kir and I were worried they might be severed. Wei loved it! Keep it goin' Amelia!
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Amelia + Saquelsis. White dove. White pigeon. White bird.
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Post by Amelia on Nov 5, 2004 0:36:43 GMT -5
I will, I will! Drat this math homework...you know the proverbial "I'd rather be fishing" bumper stickers, well i want one that says "I'd rather be fanfiction writing/drawing/reading/studying my own stuff" ;D
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Post by Zoe 'n' Calosta on Nov 6, 2004 12:51:44 GMT -5
I gotta say Amelia that was awesome! Ca was on the back of my chair, digging his claws into my back in exctiement, fear, pain. Cal was making this weird whimpering sound but wei both loved it. I could feel what Everett was feeling and it makes me all the more grateful that I have Cal. Please keep going Amelia, you're a brill writer
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Post by Amelia Not Logged In on Nov 6, 2004 14:37:03 GMT -5
Thank you!!!!
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Post by Zen on Nov 6, 2004 18:37:49 GMT -5
Wow, Amelia. This is only the second piece of your writing I've read, but... I completely adore your style! I won't say I wish I could write like you, because that would be evil idea-stealing, but I do wish I could sneak away some of your talent. XD Nah, I wouldn't do that. Cheers, keep writing. Can't wait to read more. ^^
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Post by Amelia Not Logged In on Nov 6, 2004 19:37:51 GMT -5
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Post by Darkshadow on Nov 15, 2004 13:00:33 GMT -5
Wow! It's really good, but I felt a bit uncomfortable while reading it.. Where exactly did Saquelsis become distressed, Amelia?
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Post by Amelia NLI on Nov 18, 2004 17:18:03 GMT -5
Actually, it was a different draft...the beginning was slightly differently worded. Hei didn't become distressed while I was writing it, but then a while later I started imagining the sensation of having your [corporeal] dæmon pulled, and he just freaked.
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Post by Key & Nax on Nov 20, 2004 15:34:07 GMT -5
Wow. That was brilliant! Your writing style comes across as so mature and powerful. *shivers* I had my fists clenched and my heart in my mouth, Nax was digging his claws into my shoulders and getting increasingly agitated. I swear, the emotion was almost electric. Wei were both really tense... I hope I get to read more, it's great!
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Post by Amelia NLI on Nov 20, 2004 22:52:51 GMT -5
wow....you guys are so nice!!! I'm trying to finish it....school you know. Bleh.
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