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Oct 29, 2004 17:38:13 GMT -5
Post by Kiba on Oct 29, 2004 17:38:13 GMT -5
no kidding
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Addy
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11/12/04 - The day of settling. 11/22/04-The day I beleive in Dust.
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Oct 30, 2004 7:51:17 GMT -5
Post by Addy on Oct 30, 2004 7:51:17 GMT -5
I have more. Here we go:
Oceana Dunes of Lavendar sing so sweetly, encircles around thee and enchants on thine.
Rays of sunlight dance around us and entrances us.
The water sings, sighs softly, and runs her hands around us.
Just feel Oceana, the sand whispers.
Oceana's eyes sparkle like a blue planet suspended in space.
Above, sky combimes with water and shines a thousand little lights.
Oceana beats on the sand and I look at you and see....
Dunes of Lavendar sing so sweetly, encircles around thee and enchants on thine.
It binds us together, makes us appear like specters.
And I look at you and see Oceana and Sky kiss.
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Jalada
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Karzulum, Eu te amo
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Oct 30, 2004 11:21:23 GMT -5
Post by Jalada on Oct 30, 2004 11:21:23 GMT -5
Hmm. I have some poems, but most of them I'd like to keep to myself. Although I found one that will do...Unfortunately it's a bad one, I'm sure I have betters ones somewhere...
Who decides, What happens? Because it's not me, Otherwise I'd make it all different, Still,
Everything happens for a reason, If it isn't right, Then it's not the end,
Still I can't help, But wonder who decides, Because life's not fair, And that makes sense to who?
Everything happens for a reason, If it isn't right, Then it's not the end,
In that case, This is never going to be the end...
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Jalada
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Karzulum, Eu te amo
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Oct 30, 2004 11:24:57 GMT -5
Post by Jalada on Oct 30, 2004 11:24:57 GMT -5
Here...This is actually a song I wrote (hence the chorus), but it'll do as a poem. Although it does sound better sung. (maybe not by me though...heh)
The Sun, The moon, and the stars have fallen... *************************************
I looked into your eyes one day, I could tell what was wrong, You had something, you needed to tell me, You told me a song,
The sun, and the moon, and the stars have fallen Raining down, on us... But we don't care, 'cos we're together Away from all the fuss
We wanted a world where we could Always be alone, But this world, never came true, And now it's all gone...
The sun, and the moon, and the stars have fallen Raining down, on us... But we don't care, 'cos we're together Away from all the fuss
In our hearts, we wanted, the world, for us, We wanted all we could take, We just cared, for each other, For our love's sake...
The sun, and the moon, and the stars have fallen Raining down, on us... But we don't care, 'cos we're together Away from all the fuss
For us, to be happy Be brave and proud We showed our love for each other stood out from the crowd...
When.. The sun, and the moon, and the stars have fallen Raining down, on us... But we don't care, 'cos we're together Away from all the fuss
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Oct 30, 2004 17:22:12 GMT -5
Post by Kiba on Oct 30, 2004 17:22:12 GMT -5
Good job there guys, I wish I could write poetry but thats not me ;D.
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Addy
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Oct 31, 2004 12:00:43 GMT -5
Post by Addy on Oct 31, 2004 12:00:43 GMT -5
THIS IS NOT MINE, I JUST THOUGHT YOU MIGHT LIKE TO SEE IT!!!! I FOUND IT AT kidauthors.com! <br>Don't Turn Back poet - Lyra Through the veil of mystery, A heart throbs in pain, An angel cries up to the sky, You come back to me again. Why put such a spell as love Bound upon this earth? Why call it the most powerful Essence of rebirth? Love. We are torn apart, bound again once more, Left with tears upon our cheeks, As you leave through passion’s door. Anguish such as this Has never since cursed mankind, Yet in its lust and beauty, We are left blind. So I urge you my friend, Step into the journey of Love, And don’t ever Turn Back. Doesn't it sound like TAS? ?
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Zen
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Oct 31, 2004 16:03:13 GMT -5
Post by Zen on Oct 31, 2004 16:03:13 GMT -5
It does indeed. And I find it even more uncanny dur to the fact that the poet's name was Lyra. ::does her coincidence shiver-thing::
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Addy
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11/12/04 - The day of settling. 11/22/04-The day I beleive in Dust.
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Oct 31, 2004 16:20:50 GMT -5
Post by Addy on Oct 31, 2004 16:20:50 GMT -5
I think she was inspired by HDM.
You guys like my poetry?
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Dan
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Does this form bear finality?
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Nov 5, 2004 19:15:35 GMT -5
Post by Dan on Nov 5, 2004 19:15:35 GMT -5
I have a really weird poem, I have been toying with it for a while, quite frankly it feels evil, it radiates from the poem itself **You have been warned**
Harrow Is it our fate to run down like so much clockwork, to end while tottering twixt domes and halls? Can there be a death without derangement,or are we forever bound to the constraints of survival? Only those taken swiftly can escape this fate, but is a sacrifice of that nature less than the final fate? How can there be a road without an ending, guideless we shall surely fall, yet there are those among us who would walk straight and swift, and plow through the shimmering webs of fate and fear, good, and evil. Are such lives of worth, or are they the only of worth? Is the shining of the sun an illusion which we form to shield ourselves from these thoughts of chaos. There can be no subtlety without darkness, yet we are taught of the evils of darkness. Where then lie the shadows, slight shades, graying areas, is it right to banish them with an unforgivingly bright light, which in destroying darkness destroyes much of the worth left in the world. For what world is one without the small shadows to augment it? So I am harrowed, and ever shall be
Isn't it subtly creeeeeepy? Dal: *Smacks me* "its not creepy, just a different view!" It actually kind of reminds me of HDM in general, I won't say how so I can see if anyone else sees what I do
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Addy
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11/12/04 - The day of settling. 11/22/04-The day I beleive in Dust.
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Nov 6, 2004 10:29:44 GMT -5
Post by Addy on Nov 6, 2004 10:29:44 GMT -5
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Nov 6, 2004 12:38:00 GMT -5
Post by Zoe 'n' Calosta on Nov 6, 2004 12:38:00 GMT -5
Well here's a poem I wrote when I was depressed, Cal thought I should post it *shrugs* hes a very enigmatic daemon. I've been sucked into this black hole, this endless depression, a mental state of oblivion, of hate and oppression. Where no one can help me I'm all alone, I can't sleep, can't eat, I live the life of a crone. My friends have given up, they can't help me anymore, they're sick and tired of trying to guess what's wrong, of knocking on my door. They tried to be patient, to help me along, but somewhere along the way they realised this was all wrong. My family thinks I'm crazy and why should they care? I'm just the mistake, a hollow shell sitting there. I go along to school but don't really try, just waiting for the bell so I can go home and cry. I've been counted a lost cause by all of the doctors, jumped pumped endlessly with medicinal concoctions. I've given up on a boyfriend, of ever finding love, my life's hard enough and a relationship would make it so much more tough. The razorblade in my bedroom drawer is my only friend, they'll give me what I want and inevitably, the end. When I lay awake at night, my mind constantly reeling, I pray that sleep will leave me there, kill me when I'm dreaming.
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Nov 7, 2004 9:36:30 GMT -5
Post by rave & phair on Nov 7, 2004 9:36:30 GMT -5
*applauds for all poems* Dan, that was really free-verse-Edgar-Allan-Poe. Teh awesome.
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Addy
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11/12/04 - The day of settling. 11/22/04-The day I beleive in Dust.
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Nov 7, 2004 17:50:16 GMT -5
Post by Addy on Nov 7, 2004 17:50:16 GMT -5
the razorblade in your room? that creeps me out, raven... ew.....
Actually, I have a deppressed friend named Raven. Your aren't are you?
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Jalada
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Karzulum, Eu te amo
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Nov 12, 2004 17:43:13 GMT -5
Post by Jalada on Nov 12, 2004 17:43:13 GMT -5
See these sort of interesting poems would be better to study in my English lessons. Not the rubbish they seem to dredge up.
Good poems! Really good ;D
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Nov 13, 2004 7:14:14 GMT -5
Post by rave & phair on Nov 13, 2004 7:14:14 GMT -5
Addy: Well, I was. Slightly. Raven is a really uncommon name, anyhow. That's bizzare. *blinks* *smiles* *double-checks* I didn't write that--
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