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Post by Annie on Sept 1, 2004 20:41:44 GMT -5
Ooo! Pretty! I wish I could write pretty poetry like that... Eh, drawing is more my thing anyway, so I'll retire to sitting, reading, and commenting occasionally.
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Zen
dæmian
changeling + magpie
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Post by Zen on Sept 2, 2004 15:49:59 GMT -5
it was something spur of the moment that i doodled in my english notebook last year... it's very short, but i thought it was pretty, so here you are -
fog over flame fire replaced by grey and stars all the brilliant lights of heaven are the feathers of my soul
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Post by Darkshadow on Sept 2, 2004 15:57:22 GMT -5
Now that is cool!
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Zen
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changeling + magpie
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Post by Zen on Sept 2, 2004 16:00:35 GMT -5
thanks ^^
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Breeze
rising dæmian
?.Laura. & .Cirxe.?
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Post by Breeze on Sept 20, 2004 15:08:05 GMT -5
Hm. Nothing special. I posted this on the your_daemons community, but.. yeah. I'll post it again because I've nothing else to say. I hear strange noises when no one is around No one can explain what is wrong with me. But I know It hides inside my heart, It lingers in my fingertips, It sees everything I see, Only to be felt, Never touched, Never seen. Still I know it is there No one can prove me wrong yet And without it, I would die a lonely death When our forever ends, We'll leave together Humming songs of the times we've shared Inside of you Something lives, Something loves, Something lies, I am not the only one who knows this, Maybe you can feel it too. I hear strange noises when no one is around No one can explain what is wrong with me.
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Zen
dæmian
changeling + magpie
Posts: 401
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Post by Zen on Sept 20, 2004 15:48:48 GMT -5
::speechless:: ::worships at the almighty feet of breeze:: that. is. SO. cool.
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Post by Cat on Sept 20, 2004 15:55:23 GMT -5
::as speechless as Zen:: Breeze, that's ... amazing.
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Breeze
rising dæmian
?.Laura. & .Cirxe.?
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Post by Breeze on Sept 20, 2004 16:00:43 GMT -5
Haha, thanks. xD
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augury
dæmian
human: augury / daemon: kelan
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Post by augury on Sept 20, 2004 16:39:30 GMT -5
"when our forever ends"... what a great line. +<3
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Post by ice on Sept 21, 2004 8:36:29 GMT -5
Bravo! Bravo! *Clap, clap, clap...*
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Post by Annie on Sept 21, 2004 18:43:19 GMT -5
*is speechless as well*
......Well, I'm speechless! Do you really expect me to say anything after that statement!?
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Post by rave & phair on Sept 24, 2004 13:39:48 GMT -5
*also speechless*
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Post by Darkshadow on Sept 24, 2004 15:17:00 GMT -5
Speechless too.
Hi Wolfbane. I know you're watching..
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Post by Cat on Sept 24, 2004 19:11:37 GMT -5
After much mental debate, I finally decided to put up this poem I wrote some time ago ... I fear not being accepted by people, so, yeah, that's why I didn't post this before. And, I know, it could be longer ... meh. I'm too lazy.
There's something locked inside of me And nobody knows what he is. But he lives.
He lives, He laughs, He speaks, He sings. He's what makes me –<br>My everything.
He hopes, He cries, He thinks, He dreams, He's all I ever wanted. All I ever need.
And yet nobody knows what he is.
If they knew ... They would see. I am him. He is me. Not him –<br>Not I –<br>But we. My soul, my guide Forever set free ... But locked away Inside of me.
If only they could know what he is ...
They don't understand So they scorn and fuss But they're just like me. You're not I. You're us. Like him and I. It's him and you.
And oh, if only you knew …<br> There's something locked inside of me And nobody knows what he is.
But you have one too And he'll love you. Forever and a day.
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Post by Okibi on Sept 24, 2004 20:26:49 GMT -5
I enjoyed reading your poem, Cat. ^^ It's beautiful to me because I can empathize with it... I think most of us here can. You needn't have hesitated to share it. Show us more if you have any! =)
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